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The Void| pollz |
Posted: Dec 29 2005, 11:16 AM
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A burning void of nothingness,
A chance to explore, Hating my life and wishing for more. Looking around us, What can we see? But there’s nothing for you and there’s nothing for me. Maybe one day when we are old and not young, We will find what we searched for And our life won’t be poor Or perhaps we will stay in this void of nothing And just hold onto our wish that will never come true Or maybe all this will just happen to me And perhaps life will be more fortunate for you, This hope that I keep is my flame in the dark My dreams are dead But I am not, In this void I am and here I will rot. -------------------- Go Quietly Admist The Noise And Remember What Peace There Is In Silence
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| RHunt |
Posted: Dec 30 2005, 11:01 PM
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Poem is a little off beat, but other then that it's very nice. Dark with a strange feeling of hopefullness followed by nothingness.
-------------------- "The best way to have a good idea is to have lots of ideas." - Linus Pauling
My Webpage - RKP Hunt's Literary Works |
 
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Posted: Dec 31 2005, 03:47 AM
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I admit I'm not the best with rhythms and beats and I need to work alot on my poems.
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| pollz |
Posted: Dec 31 2005, 03:49 AM
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guest is me. forgot.... again!
-------------------- Go Quietly Admist The Noise And Remember What Peace There Is In Silence
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| RHunt |
Posted: Dec 31 2005, 08:01 PM
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They aren't my strong points either, but are good to write when you have nothing else to write or can't take the time it takes to write on a story.
-------------------- "The best way to have a good idea is to have lots of ideas." - Linus Pauling
My Webpage - RKP Hunt's Literary Works |
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