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 Character Ideas, Discuss your chars and recieve advice
Ravenrocksmysocks
Posted: Oct 21 2005, 01:45 AM


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Because I am lazy tonight, I'm going to help out AceofSpades here. Keep in mind I'm no professionial, so my advice could be ignored. XD

Well, at first when I read Ace's weapons, I was a bit overwhelmed. It seemed she had a lot of weapons to deal with. I like to have the character stick to one unique power, and have them master it or find out new techniques with it. It doesn't seem like she should need the wire. She could get over obstacles some other way- she seems smart enough to figure such a thing out.

Her outfit sounds pretty cool, but I want to know more about her physical appearance. I wanna know if she looks childish, with a round face and huge eyes, or if she has a stubborn, square chin and narrow eyes that flash when she laughs. Descriptions like that can lead to insight into personality.

More backround about how she feels about being a villian, or how she feels about following in her father's footsteps. Or about her fear of the Batman. The crush on Robin should be explored in more depth, with some internal conflict and angst if you want to pull it off. Crushes on Titan character could easily go awry if you don't play it right.

^^ If you want to know anything else, just ask. I'll try to help out more on this topic.

I was going to enter a description of my own character, but now I don't feel like it. XD


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Severus Rage
Posted: Oct 21 2005, 06:39 PM


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QUOTE (Ravenrocksmysocks @ Oct 21 2005, 01:45 AM)
Well, at first when I read Ace's weapons, I was a bit overwhelmed.

Really? Counting the cards as one unit, the wire, and the mace, that makes three.
You should see what Pyro hauls around, if I ever post his profile. I'm still waiting for some people to give their thoughts on my character.


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Ravenrocksmysocks
Posted: Oct 21 2005, 06:49 PM


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Really? Counting the cards as one unit, the wire, and the mace, that makes three.
You should see what Pyro hauls around, if I ever post his profile. I'm still waiting for some people to give their thoughts on my character.


It's just that you don't want to have too many weapons, because after a certain point it seems like powerplaying, or making your character seem they're good at everything. I usually have my character have one weapon, two tops. And this means having one type of weapon- I have one character who carries around over two dozen knifes on them.


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Severus Rage
Posted: Oct 21 2005, 07:54 PM


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I see... Then maybe Pyro isn't so bad after all... He's no Max Payne.


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AceOfSpades
Posted: Oct 21 2005, 11:12 PM


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QUOTE (RageTH @ Oct 21 2005, 07:54 PM)
I see... Then maybe Pyro isn't so bad after all... He's no Max Payne.

Rofl, Please, You god play your character horribly... Rose has to whack you with a metal rod, and you still don't go down. XD Sorry...

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Thanks RavenRocks, I'll try to keep all that in mind and place more description with her. The bit you mentioned about the weapons... it's true, three does seem exscesive. But in a way, they all share there on importance. Mallet speaks for itself, whacking people is fun. laugh.gif Acctually, the mallet had originally been a gift from her father... guess I should add that there. >.> Remember, still in the creation process. Ahem, the wire is of importance for such things as escape and overcoming such obstacles as wide gaps. It can also be used for attacking enemies when she's down. And the playing cards? Mostly just a distraction.

If you look at Batman or Robin, they to have a variety of such weapons. I'm gonig to stick with Robin for this but ehh... he has his bo, his bird-a-rangs, his exploding disks, his >.> gun thingy that shoots out so he can scale buildings and what not, his R-cycle (would transportation count?) and not to forget what weapons come along with his Red X costume (that he no longer has... for some odd reason... that we don't know because someone stole it...)

So is the three really excessive? 0.o Anyhow, you're right, I should describe (more or less) her apperance with more detail and really catch the smaller stuff to help make her stand out more. Thanks! You've been much help. wink.gif
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Ravenrocksmysocks
Posted: Oct 22 2005, 12:23 AM


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Well, Robin is a pretty good example- some people think he's 'Gary-Sue' when it comes to fighting. And it's just that most of his weapons are projectiles, or something to whack the villian with. Robin's mastered a lot of arts, but he has an ample past to back it up. If you want to pull three very different weapons off, maybe you could explain the training she had to go through to learn how to use them.

Actually, I kinda like the idea of using cards to fight. I was always a fan of Sheena from Tales of Symphonia. XD


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Severus Rage
Posted: Nov 14 2005, 06:27 PM


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QUOTE (AceOfSpades @ Oct 21 2005, 11:12 PM)
Rofl, Please, You god play your character horribly... Rose has to whack you with a metal rod, and you still don't go down. XD Sorry...

Mind going into further detail?

I'll bet you'll downright hate Pryo then, too... he gets injured! A lot!

This post has been edited by RageTH on Nov 14 2005, 06:33 PM


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Severus Rage
Posted: Nov 22 2005, 08:11 PM


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I hate to DP, but does anyone have ANY interest in looking at my OC whatsoever?

*sigh*


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raven and robin 4-ever
Posted: Nov 22 2005, 09:46 PM


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oh I do I do *gets high voice* please oh sorry but thatoh and if anyone hasent said this can I be Raven?


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Nightlark
Posted: Nov 23 2005, 02:21 AM


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QUOTE (raven and robin 4-ever @ Nov 22 2005, 09:46 PM)
oh I do I do *gets high voice* please oh sorry but thatoh and if anyone hasent said this can I be Raven?

0_o...

OK?...

Ehh, we don't have an official Raven. So you could make an RP and be Raven IN it, I suppose.

I'll look at your OC too, RageTH.


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raven and robin 4-ever
Posted: Nov 23 2005, 09:45 AM


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QUOTE (Nightlark @ Nov 23 2005, 02:21 AM)
QUOTE (raven and robin 4-ever @ Nov 22 2005, 09:46 PM)
oh I do I do *gets high voice* please oh sorry but thatoh and if anyone hasent said this can I be Raven?

0_o...

OK?...

Ehh, we don't have an official Raven. So you could make an RP and be Raven IN it, I suppose.

I'll look at your OC too, RageTH.

Ummm............ ok thanks I gess O.O *after that faints for no reason what so ever*


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