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 Training on Lok
Jay Young
Posted: Feb 24 2005, 09:04 PM


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The ebon hawk landed in the spaceport of lok. Jay climbed out and waited for his master
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 24 2005, 11:50 PM


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Darth Jatek came out of the Ebon Hawk.

Jatek: This place will do well.
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Jay Young
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 12:04 PM


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Jay:Yes it will, whats the first thing to do
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Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:15 PM


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Jatek: You must build a lightsaber.
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Jay Young
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:21 PM


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Jay:OK master, where do i begin
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Jatek: We will need to find parts. Where could we find lightsaber crystals on this planet?
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Jay Young
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:24 PM


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JAy remembered the old jedi enclave on this planet.

JAy:There is an abandon jedi enclave on this planet that is by a crystal cave
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:25 PM


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Jatek: We must go there then.
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Jay Young
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:28 PM


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Jay climbed into a speeder and started it up waithing on his master

Jay:I know were it's at
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:29 PM


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Jatek got on the speeder.

Jatek: Where did you get this?
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Jay Young
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:32 PM


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Jay:I found it on board the Edon Hawk

The speeder sped of to the old jedi enclave
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:35 PM


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Jatek looked out to the side of the speeder and switched on his lightsaber.
Soon many loud crashing noises came.

Jatek: Heh heh heh.
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Jay Young
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The Speeder slowed to a stop at the old runes. JAy climbed out and walked to the near by cave.

Jay:here it is
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:40 PM


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Jatek got out and looked into the cave.

Jatek: Heeeeellooooo.

His shout echoed through the cave.
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Jay Young
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:42 PM


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JAy walked into the back of the cave were tones od colored crystals stood.

Jay:Wow
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:47 PM


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Jatek: Which colour would you like? While I'm here I think I will get another crystal and make mine stronger.

Jatek takes a lightsaber crystal and puts it in his robe.
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Jay Young
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Jay walked over to a red crystal formation. He broke off a crystal and walked over to his master

Jay:I want this red one
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:51 PM


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Jatek: Good.

OOC: You are one post from becoming an advanced member.
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Jay Young
Posted: Feb 25 2005, 05:52 PM


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OOC:Cool

Jay:Now the next step
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Marve Warill
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Jatek: Now you must put your lightsaber together.
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Jay Young
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Jay:Ok, but were are the parts
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Marve Warill
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Jatek: We can look around, maybe dismantle some things.
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Jay Young
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Jay:Right, u shuld look and dismatle cause i have no clue about the parts
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OOC: I don't intend to be mean, but you guys need alot of work. Be more descriptive, and stop with all these one line posts.
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Marve Warill
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Jatek walks to the speeder and gets in.

Jatek: Let's go to the city.
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Jay Young
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OOC:Sorry, when im on a new site i do one line posting, i shall stop

Jay walked out of the cave and climbed into the speeder

Jay:lets go

Jay hedl the red crystal in his hand looking at it's form
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Marve Warill
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OOC: I'm sorry, I'll try to make them a bit longer.
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Jay Young
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Jay put the speeder in drive.The speeder drove on the rocky ground to the city up ahead.
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Senger Weren
Posted: Feb 26 2005, 02:21 AM


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Sengar looked at them coming to the city.

Sengar: What fools! How could they not sense me hiding in their ship and spying on them! Now I shall steal their minds! After I steal that apprentice's mind, his master shall be weakend!

Sengar snuck into the shadows between two buildings and took a citizen with him and there was much screaming but it suddenly stopped.

OOC: He's really an Anzati, not a human. Anzati can sense powerful life forces and steal their mind using tendrils they stick up their noses. They hide their tendris in their cheeks. But the victim has to be weakend sevearly for them not to kill them while they steal their mind.
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Marve Warill
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Jatek felt a very strong presence with the force,
but it didn't feel normal. Something felt wrong.
He paid no attention to it (thinking it was his apprentice)
and thought about how his apprentice would handle the task of building a lightsaber.

Jatek: We should go back to the ship, there are the parts we need there.
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Jay Young
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Jay:No, somethings not right, there is something wrong in the force. I feel the dark poer from them.

As the silver speeder came closer to the ship the power Jay felt grew stronger.
The silver speeder turned away from the ship and headed to the city

Jay:Master someone is on the ship.
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 27 2005, 04:32 AM


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Jatek used force sense again, this time paying more attention.

Jatek: Yes I sense it too, but what is it?

I must test his abilities in the force he thought to himself

Jatek: I will test your abilities in the force. Try to put fear in the heart of a civillian.
I will show you.

He held his hand in the air, a deep look of concentration on his face then suddenly a person just screamed than ran into a dark alley.

Jatek: See? Now you try.
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Then the screaming stopped and there was the sound of somone running away.

Sengar: Whew! I was almost caught!

Then a person came out of his house who was near there.

"What did you just say?" the person said.

Let me come into your house and explain. There was a lot of screaming but it suddenley stopped.
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Jay Young
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Jay:I can do better

Jay rased his hand at a man concentrating in the force. The man started to go insane, clawing him self to death.Jay's hand cluched the stearing wheel again.

Jay:Is that good
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Marve Warill
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Jatek: Amazing!! Where did you learn that? That kind of power is only possible at my level.

Jatek pointed to a small piece of machinery on the ground.

Jatek: Stop!! We can use that.

Jatek used the force to lift a part out of the machine. He handed the part to his apprentice.

Jatek: We will need this for your lightsaber. Most of the other parts should be in our ship.
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Jay Young
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Jay put the part in his bag in the back.

Jay:I do not know where I learned it. All i did was thik about it and it happened
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Sengar herd every word that they said.

Sengar: Hahahahaha! Now they'll get back to their ship and hopfuly I can then steal that apprentice's mind!

Sengar walked out of the house and creapt towards their ship.
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Marve Warill
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Jatek: That is remarkable, your training will be a lot shorter than I expected.

He removed his lightsaber from his belt and held it firmly in his hand.

Jatek: I sense danger. Be on your guard.

Jatek activated one end of his lightsaber and waited.

Jatek: There it is!

He pointed to their ship.

Jatek: We must be very careful.

He activated the other end of his lightsaber.
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Jay Young
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The sppeder sped closer to the ship then stopped. Jay jumped out and waited for his master to tell him what to do
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Sengar saw that they had stopped suddenly, so he ran away into the shadows of a building.

Sengar: How could they have known that I was here?

Sengar was watching them, his red eyes gleaming in the shadows.
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Marve Warill
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Jatek: We must go in. I can handle anything in there.

He held his lightsaber in a ready stance.

Jatek walked in.

Jatek: Come, my apprentice.

Jatek walked around taking a few parts.

Jatek: You can build your lightsaber but first I must put in the crystal I got.

He sat down next to a small workbench and took the lightsaber crystal out of his robe. Half an hour later he got up and activated his lightsaber.

Jatek looked at the powerful blade.

Jatek: Now you can build yours.
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Jay Young
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Jay walked over to the small work bench and got started.
A half an hour Jay stood up and swithed his lightsaber on. A glowing red blade shot out from it.Jay twirled it around and then switched it off.

Jay:I am done master



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Marve Warill
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Jatek: Now you must train with your new lightsaber, we should leave the ship and travel on the speeder.

Jatek walked out of the ship.

Jatek: Come to the speeder and we can go.

He stood by the speeder waiting for his apprentice to come.
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Jay Young
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JAy walked out to the land speeder and got inHE took his lightsaber in his hands and studied it
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Marve Warill
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Jatek: Let's go.

Jatek started the speeder and drove away.

Jatek: We will head to the mountains, there you can train.
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Jay Young
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Jay:OK

Jay studied his lightsaber some more, looking at it's design and evrything else on it
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Marve Warill
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They arrived at the mountains and Jatek stopped the speeder.

Jatek got out of the speeder.

Jatek: Now, bring out your lightsaber and activate it.

Jatek brought out his own lightsaber and activated both ends.
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Jay Young
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Jay got out and turned on his lightsaber. the red blade shot out of the top. He twirled it around for a sec then stopped.

Jay:Now what
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Marve Warill
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Jatek: Slash that mountain over there.

He pointed at a large mountain.

Jatek: Concentrate on all of your hate and anger, give in to the power of the dark side.
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Jay Young
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JAy concentrated on the power of the dark side. His anger flowed through him.Jay took his lightsaber and relased his anger. He slashed the mountain.

JAy :There
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Marve Warill
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Jatek examined the cut in the mountain.

Jatek: Very good. Now try again, this time throw your lightsaber at it.





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Marve Warill
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Jatek: I will show you.

Jatek let his anger flow through him, concentrating on the power of the dark side.
He threw his lightsaber at a mountain, his lightsaber spinning and it hit the mountain. Both sides hit the mountain and large rocks broke off and hit the ground.

Jatek held his hand out and his lightsaber flew back into his hand.

Jatek: Your lightsaber isn't double-bladed, but it can still inflict heavy damage if you are strong enough with the force. To be powerful you must learn this, it is the Sith code:

Peace is a lie, there is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me.


Jatek: Do you understand? Your power comes from passion, anger and hate. Jedi try to stay away from them, but the Jedi are wrong. Peace and mercy are the emotions you should avoid.
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Jay Young
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Jay:Yes master, i understand

JAy threw his lightsaber at the mountain. THe saber spun and hit the moutin anda few large rocks fell off. Jay held out his hand, and the saber came back to him
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Marve Warill
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Jatek held his lightsaber in a ready stance.

Jatek: You must fight me to prove your strength!

Jatek deactivated one end of his lightsaber and charged at his apprentice.

Jatek: Use the power of the dark side and attack!
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Jay Young
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Jay sturk his masters lightsaber blade in anger deflecting his blow.He then struck his master agin and again in anger.
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Marve Warill
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Jatek defended the blows quickly and used the force to push him back.

Jatek: How will you handle this?

Jatek jumped over him and attacked from behind.
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Jay Young
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JAy spun around and deflected the blow. He then struck at his master aain releaseing his anger.
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Marve Warill
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Jatek Tried to block the attack, but it was too strong and it knocked his lightsaber out of his hand and onto the ground.

Jatek: You have proven your strength with your lightsaber.

Jatek walked over to his lightsaber and picked it up.

Jatek: Now you must learn to use the force as a weapon in combat. You saw how I used the force to push you back and to jump over you. Now you must learn to use the force in combat.

He activated his lightsaber.

Jatek: Fight with your lightsaber and with the force.
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Jay:Yes master

He attacked again with might and used force shock to stun him for a secound.
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Jatek was stunned and he moved out of the way just in time to avoid his attack.

Jatek: Try to use the force to jump.

Jatek activated the other end of his lightsaber and attacked him wildly with both ends.
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Jay Young
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Jay Force Jumped behind him and attacked. The blade cut off a part of his robe
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Jatek used all of his anger and made an extremely powerful attack.

Jatek: How will you handle this?
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Jay Young
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Jay Jumped over the attack and attacked his master
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Jatek was filled with rage as his apprentice hopped around, dodging all of his attacks.

Jatek: You cannot jump away if I jump first.

He jumped into the air and attacked his apprentice.
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Sengar watched the fight.

Sengar: Ha ha ha! When they are done with their fight they will be weak! I can then drain their minds!

Sengar went into their ship and hid in a secret compartment.
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Padawan said appearing from almost no where in the ship "Is there any chance that there is room left for me to join in your training?"
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((we are not roleplaying in the ship. We are roleplaying in the mountains. Plus, this topic is kinda dead))
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Jin Zar raced to the planet as he hopped out of his X-Wing in alarm. "Jedi we need your assistance on Hoth... please come immediatly.
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DarthJwizz Aproched towards Jin Zar grabedhis light saber and attack
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Jin took off on his X0Wing before he could attack saying... if you wanna fight come to the attack on Hoth!"
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Darth Jwizz followed Jin Zar to hoth
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