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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 22 2005, 06:06 PM


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Marve Warill climbed onto his Tauntaun
and rode out of the Wampa cave.

Marve: I think it'll do good to explore around here.

A few minutes later a huge blizzard came
up and blew Marve off his Tauntaun.

Marve got back up onto his Tauntaun and
covered his face with his robe.
After traveling for an hour he gave up and
collapsed on the snow next to his Tauntaun.

Marve: (Muffled by his robe) HELP!! IS THERE ANYONE OUT THERE?

He reached out with the force trying to
feel something but he was so exausted all he felt was his Tauntaun.

Marve: (Taking his robe off his mouth) IS THERE ANYBODY OUT THERE!!!

His Tauntaun was scared by the noise and ran away.
Marve got up and ran to catch it but fell over again.

Marve:I might be able to search for my Tauntaun with the force and he reached out with the force again but he collapsed and fell unconscious.....
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Darth Feerse
Posted: Feb 23 2005, 01:42 AM


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Darth Feerse, the Arna King, was looking around the planet for any type of cave he could scavenge. He heard a man yelling for help. Curious, Feerse went over to him. He was talking to the unconcious man through the Force.

FEERSE (Force): Ah, the Force emulates from you, on the lightest of all sides...the Jedi. Let me take you to Arnia. There we can talk...

Feerse ((hope this isn't god-modding)) took the unconcious body and rode off to the warm city of Arnia. There they would talk more.
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 23 2005, 01:50 AM


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Marve opened his eyes for a moment then shouted.

Marve: TAUNTIE!!!! WHERE'S MY TAUNTIE!!!!!!!!!!
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Darth Feerse
Posted: Feb 23 2005, 01:55 AM


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FEERSE: Don't worry about...Tauntie...he has been guided to Arnia, which is where were headed. Then we will talk about important matters.
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 23 2005, 02:05 AM


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Marve: How far is this Arnia you speak of?

Marve: (Crying) I miss Tauntie. Sniff.
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Darth Feerse
Posted: Feb 26 2005, 03:21 PM


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FEERSE: Arnia is right up here, we're not far away.

They pull into the warming station.

FEERSE: So, what are you doing on Hoth?
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The Pantheress
Posted: Feb 26 2005, 08:31 PM


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There is a loud noise outside - a cry. A Tauntaun.

The white beast stumbles through the door, a woman upon its back with skin nearly the colour of the snow outside. Her black cloak covers the back of the Tauntaun like a sheet, catching the wind and rippling.

She dismounts, bringing the Tauntaun forward.

"Is this your Tauntaun?" She asks the crying man.

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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 27 2005, 04:21 AM


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Marve Warill got up and looked at the Tauntaun that had come.
He ran forward and knocked the woman on to the cold snow.

Marve: TAUNTIE!!!!!!

Marve jumped on to his Tauntaun and rode around in a large circle.

Marve: WHEEEEEEEEEE!!!! TAUNTIE TAUNTIE TAUNTIE!!!!!!

Marve got off Tauntie and walked towards the man who brought him here.

Marve: Was there something you said before?
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Darth Feerse
Posted: Feb 27 2005, 02:09 PM


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FEERSE: I said: What are you doing on Hoth?

Feerse looked at the man, thinking he was an infidel. But, he decided to keep his thoughts and emotions inside.
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The Pantheress
Posted: Feb 28 2005, 01:59 AM


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"Is that it?" said the dark woman, circling the TaunTaun man, "not even a thankyou?"

Her slit pupilled eyes were glittering dangerously.
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 28 2005, 02:45 AM


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Marve looked at the woman.

Marve: You, the one who brought back Tauntie. How did you find him? You must have stolen him!!!

Marve pushed her into the snow again. This time using the force.

He turned to Feerse.

Marve: I was sent by the jedi academy to investigate the disappearence of a student here on Hoth, but when I got here the student had turned to the dark side and he stole my X-Wing. So I am stranded here now.

Marve sensed his mind with the force.

Who are you? You are not good or evil.
He thought to himself.
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The Pantheress
Posted: Feb 28 2005, 02:56 AM


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The Pantheress pushed herself up off the snow, brushing the ice off with the Force.

"You accuse me of stealing so lightly? I do not steal. I too was sent here in search of the Jedi student, but ... 'Tauntie' ... ran me down. I ask you, where did you learn your manners? Hoth or not, this is no way to treat a lady."
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 28 2005, 03:02 AM


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Marve: A lady, no. A thief, yes. But now I know you are no thief. I am sorry for my actions.

He bowed politely.

Marve: Now, we must find out why the student turned evil. Was it because of being trapped? Or could it have been a sith?

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The Pantheress
Posted: Feb 28 2005, 03:08 AM


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"I accept your apology, sir. I suppose I had better introduce myself - I am known to most as The Pantheress." She shook his hand.

"The dark side is strong here. Darth Vader once set foot here, but that is not enough. No, there is evil at work. Sith. On Hoth."
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Marve Warill
Posted: Feb 28 2005, 03:15 AM


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Marve: Hello, I am Marve Warill.

He stared out into the snow.

Marve: Where could he be?

Marve used force sense and felt a faint presence.

Marve:I feel something strange but it is very far. Do you feel it too?
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The Pantheress
Posted: Mar 1 2005, 12:13 AM


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"Yes, I too feel it. It is as though someone is listening, but they are not here."

She spun around, suddenly alert.

"Where has that other man gone?"
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Marve Warill
Posted: Mar 2 2005, 02:44 AM


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Now is my chance to escape.
He thought to himself

He turned towards the Pantheress.

Marve: Do you have a ship? I'm still stranded here and I need to get back to the academy.
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The Pantheress
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:19 AM


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"Yes, an X-Wing. I suppose I could squeeze you in - it could be a tight fit, though."

She was still peering around for the man, distracted.
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Marve Warill
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:21 AM


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Marve: Could you fit Tauntie in?

He held his hands over Tauntie trying to measure him.
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The Pantheress
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:25 AM


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The Pantheress laughed.

"Yes, he can fly it and we will stay on Hoth."
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Marve Warill
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:27 AM


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Marve: GREAT IDEA!!!

He pushed Tauntie forwards.

Marve: C'mon Tauntie.
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The Pantheress
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:29 AM


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The Pantheress crossed her arms and tapped her foot.

"Well, hurry up about it."
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Marve Warill
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:33 AM


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Marve: Where is your ship?

He pushed Tauntie further forward.

Tauntie made a loud noise and started to run away.
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The Pantheress
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:40 AM


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The Pantheress did not answer until the Taun-Taun had disappeared. She sighed, happy to not have to have been the one to tell Marve that he could not possibly take his Taun-Taun to the Academy.

"Come with me."

She grabbed his wrist and pulled him along with her, out into the snow. The ship was not far, but The Pantheress felt deep relief when she found it exactly where she left it.

"Here we are."

She relenquished her grip on Marve's wrist and gestured for him to climb aboard.
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Marve Warill
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:45 AM


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Marve got into the ship.

Marve: Let's get out of here. Are you sure you can't take Tauntie?
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The Pantheress
Posted: Mar 3 2005, 12:49 AM


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The Pantheress gazed sadly at him and squeezed his hand.

"I am sorry."

She slid into her seat, lowered the roof and they took off, leaving Tauntie, Hoth, and the mysterious man far behind.
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