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Dark Lady Erisi
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 01:49 AM


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You never looked more beautiful
Than you look tonight
In your eyes I see all I can be
And how you change my life
You held on when I let go
Now all I want is to let you know

Your love is like a river
It runs through my heart and soul
It's deep when I'm thirsty
And warm when I'm cold
And when I feel forgotten
I come running to your shore
And find peace of mind time after time
You give me everything and more

When tomorrow comes
I can face the morning
In a different light
You can change your mind a thousand times
Nothing will ever change mine

Cause your love is like a river
It runs through my heart and soul
It's deep when I'm thirsty
And warm when I'm cold
And when I feel forgotten
I come running to your shore
And find peace of mind time after time
You give me everything and more

The sun will rise and the light will shine
Oh everything will be all right
Oh yes it will (yes it will)

Cause your love is like a river
It runs through my heart and soul
It's deep when I'm thirsty and warm when I'm cold
And when I feel forgotten
I come running to your shore
And find peace of mind time after time
You give me everything and more

You give me everything and more


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Samson
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 10:16 AM


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great write. Kinda repetative, but that may be the point.still a great poem. Is this where we can post poems or something?
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Dark Lady Erisi
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 05:27 PM


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It's a song. by Billy Gillman. It's an idea I have to write a songfic. If you would like to make a place for poems feel free!


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Samson
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 07:22 PM


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LOL so how would that work. It would be like a regular RPG but in song format Like this


SAmson went his merry way
up the trail to the fray
between the goblins and the towns people
over the injured who look so feeble

I need to carry on the quest
try to do my very best
never give up even near death
to save the life of the Madian Beth

I crawled over the mountain
to the dragons lair
see many warriors dead
and a sign that say beware

I need to carr on the quest
try to do my very best
never give up,even near death
to save the life of the Madian Beth

Something like that?lol

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Dark Lady Erisi
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 10:47 PM


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Not bad Sam! Bravo. You are better at poetry than me. You should star a Thread for Poems. But that isn't what a song fic is. Check this one out: Valediction , It's my version of a song fic. All the words to the song are in italics. I'm not finished with it yet, I've been busy. I'm working on that as well as my dad's father's day gift.


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Samson
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 11:43 PM


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I already gave my dad his present. We were at LOWE's and he saw a plant he wanted. He picks one out and say "here hold this, I think I have 8.00 to spare". So when we are in line I get my wallet out and tell him happy fathers day.


Thats a great Idea. I think I will start a poem thing. I'll even make it into a rpg lol.
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Dark Lady Erisi
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 11:44 PM


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Alright Sam you do that. Don't expect me to post, I'm horrible with poetry the best thing i wrote that my friends liked was this:

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'm so happy that I'm friends with you.

Please!


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Samson
Posted: Jun 18 2005, 12:13 AM


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WOW THAT WAS GREAT!!! YOUR A NATURAL!!!! but serious anyone can write poetry, they just have to think about it and ryhmn words with other words.
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Dark Lady Erisi
Posted: Jun 18 2005, 01:45 AM


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I'm really bad at that.


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