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| Dark Lady Erisi |
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 01:49 AM
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You never looked more beautiful
Than you look tonight In your eyes I see all I can be And how you change my life You held on when I let go Now all I want is to let you know Your love is like a river It runs through my heart and soul It's deep when I'm thirsty And warm when I'm cold And when I feel forgotten I come running to your shore And find peace of mind time after time You give me everything and more When tomorrow comes I can face the morning In a different light You can change your mind a thousand times Nothing will ever change mine Cause your love is like a river It runs through my heart and soul It's deep when I'm thirsty And warm when I'm cold And when I feel forgotten I come running to your shore And find peace of mind time after time You give me everything and more The sun will rise and the light will shine Oh everything will be all right Oh yes it will (yes it will) Cause your love is like a river It runs through my heart and soul It's deep when I'm thirsty and warm when I'm cold And when I feel forgotten I come running to your shore And find peace of mind time after time You give me everything and more You give me everything and more -------------------- ![]() |
| Samson |
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 10:16 AM
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great write. Kinda repetative, but that may be the point.still a great poem. Is this where we can post poems or something?
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| Dark Lady Erisi |
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 05:27 PM
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It's a song. by Billy Gillman. It's an idea I have to write a songfic. If you would like to make a place for poems feel free!
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| Samson |
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 07:22 PM
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LOL so how would that work. It would be like a regular RPG but in song format Like this
SAmson went his merry way up the trail to the fray between the goblins and the towns people over the injured who look so feeble I need to carry on the quest try to do my very best never give up even near death to save the life of the Madian Beth I crawled over the mountain to the dragons lair see many warriors dead and a sign that say beware I need to carr on the quest try to do my very best never give up,even near death to save the life of the Madian Beth Something like that?lol |
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| Dark Lady Erisi |
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 10:47 PM
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Not bad Sam! Bravo. You are better at poetry than me. You should star a Thread for Poems. But that isn't what a song fic is. Check this one out: Valediction , It's my version of a song fic. All the words to the song are in italics. I'm not finished with it yet, I've been busy. I'm working on that as well as my dad's father's day gift.
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| Samson |
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 11:43 PM
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I already gave my dad his present. We were at LOWE's and he saw a plant he wanted. He picks one out and say "here hold this, I think I have 8.00 to spare". So when we are in line I get my wallet out and tell him happy fathers day.
Thats a great Idea. I think I will start a poem thing. I'll even make it into a rpg lol. |
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| Dark Lady Erisi |
Posted: Jun 17 2005, 11:44 PM
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Alright Sam you do that. Don't expect me to post, I'm horrible with poetry the best thing i wrote that my friends liked was this:
Roses are red Violets are blue I'm so happy that I'm friends with you. Please! -------------------- ![]() |
| Samson |
Posted: Jun 18 2005, 12:13 AM
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WOW THAT WAS GREAT!!! YOUR A NATURAL!!!! but serious anyone can write poetry, they just have to think about it and ryhmn words with other words.
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| Dark Lady Erisi |
Posted: Jun 18 2005, 01:45 AM
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I'm really bad at that.
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