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 The Magical Vivid Tales, The Vivid magic life
Shini-Miyo
Posted: Aug 19 2009, 09:42 AM


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Ok, I know I already made another topic, but I wanted to start afresh. So I'll get V_K to delete the other topic. The first story is called...

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Crystal

Chapter 1: A new beggining

A year has passed since the Dark King Incident, and Mobile Riot Force Six has once again disbanded. Once more, the heroric White Devil, Nanoha Takamachi, has taken a leave of absence to raise her daughter, Vivio Takamachi...

Hi! I'm Vivio Takamachi, a 6th grader Young Memetchi with yellow hair and blue ribbons studying in Mid-Childa Saint's Church Academy. A year ago, I join The Time-Space Administration's HQ, Section Six, as a mage apprentice to fight against a criminal known as the Dark King. But sadly, that's over. Even though we won, it's gotten a lot more boring, and we had to part ways. But the good thing is that there is now peace, and I'm living happily.

"Vivio, Breakfast's ready!"

"Coming, Nanoha-Mama!"

This is Nanoha Mama, my mother and a Memetchi with a long brown ponytail. Due to her heroric deeds in the past, everyone respected her and called her 'the White Devil'. She was working in the TSAB, but has taken a Leave of Absence to take care of me.

"After school, I'm going to congratulate you for getting into 6th Grade."

"Just like always, Nanoha-Mama!"

"Yay!"

I loved Nanoha-Mama for a long time, and we have been getting along pretty well! (Though she is a bit stingy.)

"Bye bye, Vivio!"

"Bye, Nanoha-Mama! Let's go, Kris!"

Kris is my device. He looks like a bunny with a red bow, and he's pretty cute! But he can't talk like Nanoha-Mama's device, Raising Heart. Oh, by the way, his real name is Sacred Heart.

"Vivio!"

"Ah, Lio, Corona!"

Lio and Corona are my two best friends! Lio is a Chamametchi with brown downwards ponytails, while Corona is a Female Young Mametchi with short, black hair. Lio has her own device, and I used to envy her before I got Kris! But that was 2 years ago.

"Welcome back, Vivio!"

"Same to you, Corona!"

"How was your year at TSAB? I envy you!"

"It was fine, Lio. Kris and I made friends with our partners. Two of them now work as temporary mages, while my partner went back to Earth."

"Oh, that's too bad."

"Nah, it's okay! Now that I'm back, I can live a normal life!"

"True~!"

"Vivio, now I'M the one envying you! Kris has a second form!"

"It's just a copy of Raising Heart, so it's not much. Thanks for wondering though, Lio."

"Let's hurry to the assembly hall!"

Now that I'm in 6th grade, we're going to learn even more basic magic before we move to 7th Grade, which means Intermediate magic! After school, I met up with Corona and Lio at the library.

"So, what should we read?"

"Well, teacher said we should learn more of the shooting magic, seeing as most of the class is bad at it."

"Yeah, we should! Thanks for reminding me, Vivio! I envy you too, you are so much better at shooting magic! Since Kris' second form is a copy of Raising Heart, your mom can teach you shooting magic easily!"

"Aw, come on! You guys will definetly get better! Now, let's find a book."

After 15 minutes, we finall found a book we each wanted, so I went home.

"Welcome home!"

"Fate-Mama! What a pleasure it is to see you! And Bardiche too!"

""Hello, lady."

Fate-Mama is a Violetchi with long yellow hair (like me!) and Nanoha-Mama's best friend! Ever since they were 9, they literally stuck together! Bardiche is Fate-Mama's device. And you might be wondering why I have two mamas. Well, Nanoha-Mama is my adpted mother, while Fate-Mama is my guardian. Ever since then, I've had two mamas! It was a bit weird at first, but I got used to it.

"The ship is under maintainence again. I'll make some tea, so go change your clothes, ok?"

"Ok!"

After dinner...

"I guess Kris and I are going to do some magic training!"

"Ah, wait, Vivio. Remember how I said I wanted you to pass a test? Well, if you do, I'll have a surprise for you, so train hard tonight!"

"Ok, Nanoha-Mama!"

She was right. I did have a surprise for training hard! I was getting excited. But just as I headed for the training field, I saw a dark figure in the sky.

"Who are you?"

"That is not needed, Sankt Kaiser."

"I'm not Sankt Kaiser. I'm just a clone!"

"Vivio Takamachi? We'll meet again..."

The dark figure disappeared in an instant. It felt weird, though. I was a clone of a great leader, but I didn't mind that. But...who would call me Sankt Kaiser? And did the wind feel cold?
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Yes, this was written in Vivio's POV. But don't worry! It's only for this chapter.
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Shini-Miyo
Posted: Aug 19 2009, 08:03 PM


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Chapter 2: The new student! A new bond

The next day, Vivio was walking to school again, laying the thoughts of that dark figure aside. Must be a stranger. There's nothing to worry. She thought.

"Lio! Corona!"

"Vivio! Good morning!"

"Have you been studying?"

"Yeah. Nanoha-Mama said she get me a surprise if I did well!"

"I feel a bit embaressed, though. Our schools are different from Earth's. A week after the first day and we have a test!"

"That's nothing to worry about, Lio! In fact, since Nanoha-Mama was from Earth, she says that the test system for her is worse, because you're studying for a long time and you get too anticipated!"

"Good point, Vivio. We only have 6 days left anyway."

"Well, let's go in!"

After the assembly, the trio headed to their classroom, where their teacher, Madam Annie ( devilromicpixelbob.gif ), made an annoucement.

"Good Morning, pupils! Today, we have a new student with us!"

At that moment, an Ura Young Violetchi with violet ponytails walked in.

"Nice to meet everyone! I'm Mai Hoshimura! This is my device."

Mai took out her device which just looked like a small phone, but if there's something mages know, it's that devices in unactivated forms look super puny, but they look super cool in their activated forms.

"Now, please make Mai feel welcome in this place."

"Yes, Teacher!"

"Now, let's go to the field and practice some shooting magic!"

Everyone but Vivio and Mai groaned. Vivio was looking confident while Mai just looked nervous.

At the training field

"Ok, everyone! Today, we're going to practice charge-and-shoot as a review. Bassically, charge and shoot at the target, which is about 7 meters away. But remember, the more you charge, the more accurate you shoot in the target, so aim first, then shoot! And remember: No devices!"

A few students tried, but they couldn't shoot accuratly. On Vivio's turn, she did an excellent charge-shoot that everyone clapped! Mai got nervous, however. As she charged up, she concetrated, and finally shot....she went right through the hole! Unfortunatly, that means Vivio is still the best.

At lunch time, Mai looked lonely and depressed.

"Guys, shouldn't we let Mai sit with us?"

"But we're short of one chair..."

"Don't give that excuse, Corona!"

Vivio walked over to Mai's table, smiling.

"Do you want to sit with us? Then we can be four friends!"

"...."

"Don't worry about the shooting training. Almost everyone is bad at it!"

"....Ok."'

At the table, the four started getting very friendly. Mai even further introduced her device.

"Her name is Egret. She's a boost up device, so I can't really fight much except summoning wind powers."

"That's fine, Mai! I bassically shoot rainbow balls or copy my mother's attacks!"

"That's interesting, Vivio. It's cool compared to my magic."

Vivio friendly-slapped her.

"Don't say that! Wind powers are super strong!"

"I guess."

"Vivio, hurry up and eat your food. It's getting cold."

"Ok, Corona." Vivio then made the T~T face.

After school

"Bye Lio! Bye Corona!"

"Bye Vivio! Have fun with Mai!"

It turned out Vivio wanted to walk Mai home, so they started chatting again.

"Where's your house, Mai? I don't see it?"

"Just a little more....okay! Stop!"

They stopped in front of a big tree.

"Well, see you tommorow!"

"Ok! Bye, Mai!"

As Mai walked into her house, Vivio rushed home to tell her mamas.

"I'm back!"

"Hello Vivio!"

"Nanoha-Mama! Fate-Mama!"

"Change and come downstairs. I prepared more snacks!"

"Ok!"

Meanwhile....

Someone was actually watching Mai, but no one knows who it could be...
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Who is that mysterious person? Is it the dark figure Vivio saw last night? You'll just have to wait!
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Shini-Miyo
Posted: Aug 20 2009, 08:10 AM


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Chapter 3: The dark encounter

Vivio started wondering about the dark figure again, and Mai. After all, they were friends, but when she saw the dark figure, she felt a dark presence. What was weird was that she felt the same presence on Mai. Why? Mai didn't act the least like she was evil. So why?

The next day after school, Vivio did NOT walk Mai home. For some reason, Mai went home by herself. It was really weird. And she had a bad feeling something was heading towards her...and she was right!

Watching Vivio was a Black Rozutchi and a black werewolf.

"Huh. The daughter of the aces of aces." Said the black Rozutchi

"Don't be silly." said the werewolf. "She's made from the DNA of Sankt Kaiser Regina Olivie. She's much stronger than the White Devil. Don't let your guard down, Karina."

"Giria, you silly werewolf. She's a piece of cake!" replied Karina.

"Whatever." Giria replied. "If we fail, Ipella is not going to be very happy."

"Sister takes things too seriously."

"Oh, for the love of darkness, just get the girl's Linker Core already!"

"Fine, Geez!"

Karina then took out a black pendant, which turned into a black staff with purple ribbons, and started charging at Vivio, while making a dark barrier cover the whole area Vivio was walking.

"Huh? What's going on?"

"Dark Judgement!!"

Karina tried to hit Vivio with her staff, while Vivio managed to put a barrier, but only for a short while.

"What do you want from me?!"

"Shut up, Sankt Kaiser!"

"Were you the one I saw last night?"

"No! Now shut up!"

Faucon Extrême. (Extreme Falcon)

Vivio noticed that the device of...whoever this person is speaks French. But there was no time to think about that now, because Karina suddenly had a big dark falcon above her, and as she charged towards Vivio, the falcon shot a dark ray at Vivio, putting her in great pain.

"You..leave...me...no..choice...Sacred Heart, Set Up!"

Vivio then turned into her mage form.

"Why are you attacking me? What do you want?!"

"That's none of your buisness! Shut up! Now! Dark missile, FIRE!"

Vivio tried destroying it with her rainbow blasts, but she just got hit.

***n it. I only have 2 cartridges left. How am I supposed to kill her now? Giria! Come now!

The werewolf appeared again and turned into a Black Ura Togetchi, but with wolf features.

"Guess I was wrong."

"Stupid Giara! Haha!"

"Shut up! Just defeat her!"

"I only have two cartridges left, stupid!"

"Fine!"

Vivio started to get up, but Giara charged and punched her. These guys were too fast she didn't have time to attack! Just as Giara was coming with another punch with a dark barrier, someone sheilded her. The next moment, Mai appeared in a pink dress and white barrier jacket.

"We're...friends..."
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Terrible Drama, I know XD. But chapter 4 will continue with it.
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Posted: Aug 20 2009, 09:40 AM


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This is getting good! Maybe Mai used to work for them or something and now she's against them?
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Shini-Miyo
Posted: Aug 20 2009, 09:41 AM


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You'll find out in the third last chapter, sorry ._. It's dramatic XD But all I can say is your guess is wrong. Nevermind!
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Posted: Aug 20 2009, 10:47 AM


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Chapter 4: Shadow Alliance?

"Ma..i."

"Vivio, I'm protecting you no matter what! As a sign of thanks."

Vivio saw that Mai's device activated was two big pink braclets with hearts on them and wind patterns. Karina smirked while Giria looked serious (hint hint to the truth of Mai! XD)

"Egret, let's help Vivio!"

Boost up: Healing barrier

A pink barrier surrounded Vivio.

"Don't leave this area until you're fully recovered."

"Uh...okay, Mai!"

Mai then flew into the sky and confronted Karina.

"Leave me alone from my friend!"

"Try it! Ombre Saggitarus, let's give this idiot a big *** kicking of her life!"

Lance Modalité (Spear Mode)

Ombre Saggitarus then turned into a large spear.

"I'm not letting you do that! Egret! Give me a boost-up while I cast something."

Alright.

"Spirits of the sky, lend me your aid! The gentle wind that blows past us, Sakura Blaze!"

Boost up: Speed X three

"Oh great, faster wind. Saggitarus?"

Irruption Rapidité (Breaking Speed)

As Mai summoned her super fast wind, Karina grabbed Ombre Saggitarus to try to break the speed and shoot it back at Mai. But Nanoha came out of nowhere and defended Mai.

"Good timing, Ms Takamachi!"

"Whoever you are, don't hurt Vivio or Mai! We will fight against the two of you!"

"I don't think so..."

"Who was that?"

Suddenly a Violet Gypsytchi/Urainaitchi appeared out of nowhere and hit Mai with her sword. A big fight had begun!

"Who are you?"

"I'm Viveza, Guardian of Agony of the Shadow Alliance."

"Shadow Alliance?"

Meanwhile, Vivio sat in her barrier.

"Kris, I really want to help them."

Kris shook his head.

"But why?! I'm the only one who can penetrate the dark barrier because Nanoha-Mama is fighting that Rozutchi!"

Kris reluctantly nodded.

"Ok, let's do it!"

Meanwhile....

A Tennyotchi was standing on a building, carrying a black crystal.

"So it has begun...Karina, Giria, Viveza, I wish you luck. For now I'm going to begin MY attack."

The Tennyotchi held out her magenta ring, and immediatly a magic circle portal appeared.

"Dark Crystal, I, Suave, Guardian of Regret of the dark Alliance, present to you your power to revive once more! Linker Core Collection!"

Suave put the dark crystal in front of the portal and held her hand out.

Vivio had Kris in her second mode.

"Ready, Kris?"

Yes!

"Ok. Divine-"

Suddenly, Suave's hand went right through Vivio, and she was stunned! Everyone in the battlefield saw this.

"Suave?!" Karina exclaimed.

"Seems that way." Viveza replied.

"Vivio! VIVIO!!!" Nanoha shouted.

"Linker Core retrieved." Suave chanted, and Vivio's Linker Core was collected. But then...

"....BUSTER!!!"

Finally Vivio shot through the dark barrier, but she fainted, due to her DNA being copied.

"Well, that finishes our job. Mission Acomplished. Suave, Giria, Viveza, let's go." Karina said, and they all flew away. While Mai tries to heal Vivio, Nanoha was too shocked for words.

"Vivio! Wake up! Vivio! VIVIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
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Yes, Kaze's name has been changed to Egret XD. Comments, please!
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Posted: Aug 20 2009, 08:00 PM


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Noooo! Not Vivo! Anyone but Vivo! I hope she gets her magic DNA back.
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Shini-Miyo
Posted: Aug 20 2009, 08:04 PM


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Vivio ._. And she still has her magic DNA. It was just copied XD
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Oh. I can't wait for the next part!
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Shini-Miyo
Posted: Aug 20 2009, 08:36 PM


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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanndd....IT'S HERE! XD

Chapter 5: It has begun!

At the Dark Alliance's base, the four were discussing about Vivio.

"Haha! Good one, Suave! You saved our lives!" Karina laughed.

"Oh, but of course. It's our duty as the Dark Alliance. While Sister Ipella is tracking down Linker Cores, we have to attack immediatly so we can steal them." Suave replied.

"That Ipella, always being stingy!"

"Karina, shut up." Giria replied.

Meanwhile in the secret base

*ding*

"Come in!"

"Sister Ipella, we have some good news."

It turned out this 'Ipella' was the dark figure Vivio saw a few nights ago! She was a purple Megamitchi, but she was not holding a torch XD. Suave came to talk to her.

"You got the girl's Linker Core?"

"Yes, we have."

"Hmm....there are 2 glows, which means 20 Linker Cores. We need 100."

"Indeed, Ipella."

"It's all good, Suave. We need only a few more...."

As Ipella looked at a picture of Mai she continued "then will be closer to our world once more...."

But what happened to Vivio?

Nurses were rushing about, checking Vivio's health status. Watching from outside was a worried Mai and a close-to-crying Nanoha.

"Ms. Takamachi, don't worry. Vivio will be fine!"

"I know....but I'm...worried."

Nurses rushed about again, but this time with a confirmed result.

"Ms. Takamachi, your daughter is fine. She will wake up soon."

"Thank Goodness...."

5 minutes later....

"Where...where am I?"

"Vivio! You're alright!"

Nanoha gave Vivio a tight hug...so tight Vivio could only mumble "Nsashona-msnma, don't-"

"Alright Nanoha, that's quite enough."

Fate T. Harlaown was there also.

"Fate-chan, our daughter is okay, Should I not give her a hug?"

"Yeah but..."

The two mamas started arguing....again.

Luckily for Vivio, Corona and Lio were there too!

"How are you doing, Vivio?"

"I'm fine, seriously."

"Anyway, we read your health results. Though you're fine, it looked like your Linker Core has been...how should I say..."

"-stolen."

"That's right, Corona! Wait....oops."

"STOLEN?!?? OMG!!!"

"Uh....sorry, Lio."

"It's fine. But I'd rather you don't say that!"

Nanoha finally overheard the conversation and continued it.

"Well Vivio, me and Fate-Mama decided that you're gonna get hurt alot if this keeps up. So I've decided to give your test reward early, since it will help you."

"Really?!"

"Next time you activate Kris in second form, he will have a cartridge system, so you can beat those bad guys. Good?"

"Good! Thanks, Nanoha-mama!"

"Still..."

"What?"

"If or your Linker Core is stolen, it will eventually heal. But that means you can't use your magic for the moment. So you're taking a one-day rest from school, okay Vivio?"

"Okay..."

Meanwhile, Suave was standing on a building nearby the school.

"It has begun. Our fate will come soon...."
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What do Suave and Ipella actually mean? Before chapter 6 comes out, comments please!
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Posted: Aug 21 2009, 09:03 AM


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I can't just comment because you tell me to, but I will anyway.

I hope Vivio gets better soon!
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Shini-Miyo
Posted: Aug 21 2009, 09:23 AM


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Yeah, she will. And not meaning to be rude, bit it's Vivio, not Vivo ._.

Chapter 6: Listen or be shot....seriously!

After two hours, Vivio went for a final check-up, and she has recovered fully.

"That's good, Vivio!" Mai said.

"Now that I'm all better, I can go test my new cartridge system!"

"Ah, hold on, Vivio."

"What is it, Corona?"

"Well, your mom is a little worried that those guys might attack again, so she wanted the four of us to work together. And for that..."

"You got your own device?!!?"

"Yes. My father allowed me, anyway. So, let's both go outside and test out!"

"Yeah!"

Outside Saint Church's Magic Academy, field

"I haven't really thought of it's weapon looks and my barrier jacket, so give me some time after you're done."

"Ok! Sacred Heart!"

"Blazing Star!"

"Set UP!"

Vivio then turned into her adult form, and her barrier jacket (which looks like this, but the jacket is white and not black ) was put on, while Corona pictured Blazing Star as a blue and red skateboard without wheels, and her barrier jacket was pictured as a red and white dress and of course, a white vest...and that's just what happened.

"Woah! An Extreme Gear?!? (Sonic Riders reference XD)"

"Seems like it." Vivio replied. "Alright Kris! Axel Mode!"

The bunny transformed into a copy of raising heart (the very last one at the bottom right) but with a rainbow ball instead of a red one.

"Okay, Kris. Load Cartridge!"

Load Cartridge. Command Accepeted.

Sacred Heart then loaded with 10 cartridges to get Vivio started.

"Okay, Blazing Star. Let's see what you can do!" Corona said.

"Ready Corona?"

"Ready when you are!"

"Okay, Axel....SHOOTER!"

Using Sacred Heart, Vivio shot a dozen magic balls and controlled them to follow Corona, who was flying in the air on Blazing Star.

"You're not so bad, huh, partner?" Corona said.

I guess.

"I want to see more attacks!"

Alright. This one.

"Shooting Star!"

Corona was then surrounded by gold stars, which she shot at Vivio, who managed to block it.

"Huh?! It didn't work?!"

"Yes it did!"

"Huh?"

"Look, you broke through my jacket a little. I'd say Shooting Star is much more powerful than Axel Shooter. Good job, Corona!"

"Same to you, Vivio!"

The two then went inside to rest. Nanoha was wating for them.

"So, how was Blazing Star, Corona?"

"It was awesome! I love flying with her!"

Corona then looked at Blzaing Star (Who was in her non-fighting mode- A blue star pendant.)

"Isn't that right, partner?"

Yes.

"And how was the cartridge system, Vivio?"

"Perfect! I loved it so much!"

"Good! Too bad it will be awhile before you can use it in a-"

RED ALERT! EMERGENCY!"

"What the heck was that?"

"Captain Takamachi! We have a criminal!"

"Huh?"

A screen appeared, and shown on it was Karina and Viveza flying through a nearby forest region!

"So they came back, huh?"

"Vivio, Mai, Lio, Corona, split into two groups and defeat both enemies!"

"Yes M'am!"

With that, the four girls headed out.

Listen to me...or prepared to taste Divine Buster!
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XD The title and Vivio's thought was actually from a funny MGLN motto 'Listen or be shot.' It was a meme in the first episode of the second series where it was like:

Nanoha: Listen...
Raising Heart: Divine...
Nanoha:...TO ME!
Raising Heart: Buster!

Get it? XD
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Posted: Aug 26 2009, 08:52 AM


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Chapter 7: You CAN change fate!

Viveza and Karina made an entire barrier around their area to make sure no magic DNA is left out un-copied.

"Halt there, Guardians!"

Karina heard that annyoing, kid voice anywhere. She turned her head and saw...Vivio!

"I am here to stop you! Lio, Corona, Mai!"

"Okay!"

So (in the order of Vivio, Mai, Lio and Corona), the four girls grabbed their devices.

"Sacred Heart!"

"Egret!"

"Blue Pearl!"

"Blazing Star!"

"Set UP!"

(Note: Lio's Barrier Jacket is a blue sleevles dress and a white vest.)

"Ok. Mai, you fight Viveza. Corona, that werewolf guy. Lio, the one in a soft dress. I will fight the Rozutchi!"

"Ok!"

Vivio used her telapthy to flew in front of Karina.

"Tell me your name and your reason for attacking innocent people! We could help you!"

"I'm Karina, Guardian of Lust of the Shadow Alliance. And I'm not giving my reason to a member of the Time-Space-Administration!"

"Nooooo! I'm only a former member!"

"Who cares! I'm am not siding with the likes of you! And what's your name, if not Sankt Kaiser?"

"Vivio. Takamachi Vivio!"

"Takamachi Vivu...Vivo....Jeez! Your name is hard to say!"

"Gah! How can I get that from a person who suddenly attacked me?!"

"Enough Talk, more fighiting!"

"Kris, load Cartridge."

Load Cartridge.

"Look, I don't know exactly why you are doing this, but in any case....I will help you!"

"Shut...the...**** UP! I DON'T WANT TO BE WITH THE LIKES OF YOU! GRR! DIE! DIE YOU DUMB *****!!!! SHADOW SNAKE!"

Karina immediatly shot a shadow snake out of her staff in anger at Vivio, who managed to repel it. Karina couldn't stand up well because she put alot of energy in it.

"Takamachi...you demon..."

"Fine, I'm a demon! Like my mother, I'll use my hellish tools to make you listen! Axel Shooter!"

Vivio then shot balls of magic at Karina, who barely blocked it with her staff.

"You've become stronger...."

Meanwhile, Mai was fighting Viveza.

"So your weapon is only a boost device, huh? Interesting. I guess your battle proves that boost devices don't have lots of flaws, then. Good job."

Viveza pulled up her glove a little, revealing a bleeding cut on her arm.

"Thank you. You too, Viveza. I'm afraid I have to interfere you duty, though. I guess it's my job to interfere the bad guys."

"So I guess we're bad guys to you....fine then. We'll both make each other understand our points."

"It's a deal...."

Leaving the talk aside, Mai and Viveza started fighting again. Corona and Lio were fighting their respective enemies also.

"Why can't you listen to us?!" Corona asked Giria.

"Because you don't understand anything from us!" Giria retorted

"Then why can't you explain! Can't we help someway?! Huh?!"

Lio was trying to reason with Suave, too.

"I don't even want to fight! Why?!"

"....our master will bring a new world to us....we have to achieve that at all costs!"

"Then isn't that selfish?!"

"Huh?"

"You're copying DNA from so many innocent people....just for your own world!"

"Innocent?! This world is corrupted! That's why!"

Unlike the other three battles, Lio and Suave were both crying while standing up for their descions.

Suddenly, in a rage, Suave released a dark energy and destroyed the barrier. Then she fell unconcious.

"Huh? Suave broke the barrier?" Karina asked.

"Well, Mai. I guess our battle ends here. It'll be a promise we'll explain our points..."

"Ok."

As the four left, Mai heared Viveza whisper "When the time comes....everyone but you will understand. I'm not sure whether I should be scared or not..."

Since then, Mai kept being haunted by that message....
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Dun dun dun XDD What does Viveza actually mean? You'll have to wait and see!
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Posted: Sep 6 2009, 01:31 AM


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SORRY EVERYONE! I'M BAAAAAAAAACK!

Chapter 8: Vivio and Vita, the bond of student and teacher

Since it was a Sunday, Vivio would usually be happy in the mornings. But something in her still felt uneasy. She still wondered why the Shadow Alliance wanted to steal people's Linker Cores. She was about to step out of bed when she heard her mom on the phone.

"Hello? Ah, Hayate-chan! It's been a while! Huh? Relocating Section Six...near my house?! Well....I guess thay's fine. It's going to be a few kilometres away so yeah. Ah, so we have to come there when we're free. Okay then! We'll be there in the afternoon!"

As soon as Nanoha hung up the phone, Vivio ran to her.

"Is that Aunt Hayate?"

"Yes! She wants us to spend more time in Section Six due to these recent events. And best of all, all the staff and fowards are coming back!"

"Really?!"

"Really, Vivio. Me, you, Fate-Mama and the rest will all be there in the afternoon."

"YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! I CAN'T WAIT!"

Mobile Riot Force 6, 5 January 086, 12 noon....

"Everyone! We're here!"

"Nanoha! Vivio!"

"Ah! Aunt Hayate! Teacher Vita! It's nice to see you!"

Yagami Hayate was second Lieutenant and the 'boss' of the entire Section Six. Vita was the Stars Team Sub-Commander, and even though she was in a different team from Vivio, she still taught her sometimes. Hayate is a 1_VioletchiBlink.gif with brown hair while Vita is a 11jvhjo.gif with long orange braids. She looked 8 years old, but she's really an eternal child, and she's pretty fierce.

"Vivio! Stop calling me Teacher Vita!"

"Too bad!"

"HEY!"

Nanoha giggled at the two, then she said to Vivio "Hayate and I will be discussing matters on the bad guys. Until everyone comes, which is in 1 hour, you can go to our room and talk with Vita!"

"Okay~!"

In Nanoha, Fate and Vivio's old room, Vita and Vivio were discussing about Vivio's worries.

"I see...so your Linker Core was stolen...."

"Yes, Teacher Vita...."

"Huh! Reminds me of 16 years ago."

"16...years ago?"

"When your mothers were still 9. You do know Hayate has a book, right?"

"Yeah. It's called the Book of Darkness, or...now known as the Blessed Wind, Reinforce. She uses it to cast her magic, am I right?"

"Yes. But 16 years ago, that was not the case. At that time, it was the Lost Logia, the Book of Darkness."

"Lost Logia? You mean like the relics?"

"Yeah, and as dangerous as the Relics. The Book of Darkness chooses it's master randomly, and this time it was Hayate. Along with me, Signum, Shamal and Zafira, we were the guardians of the Book of Darkness. Initially, Hayate made us promise to not steal Linker Cores for the Book of Darkness, and we agreed. But then her doctor told us her parlysis was getting worse."

"Par...lysis? You mean she was in a wheelchair?"

"Yeah. For that reason, we had to break our promise and gather Linker Cores for the Book of Darkness, for it was causing a curse upon her. Also, the master grants one wish when the book is filled. Until two masked men completed the book....by using our Linker Cores."

"What?!"

"They were actually Officer Chrono's teachers, the Lieze twins, in disguise. Apparently their master wanted to seal the book and Hayate, but he didn't realised it was impossible, plus it's legality. Hayate thought Nanoha and Fate killed us, so she screamed in horror and the book controlled her. But thanks to Nanoha, she was saved, and so were we."

"So are you telling me....this crystal-"

"Yeah. They need Linker Cores too. Why I don't know. But what's ironic is..."

Vita started laughing.

"What?"

"That Karina person called you a demon, just like how I called Nanoha!"

"Huh?! Jeez, similarities. I just wish we could convince them...."

"....when you are determined to do things you are desperate to do, you don't hear the words from others."

"Vita?"

"Both your Fate-Mama and I were the same. Fate didn't care about whether she was right or wrong, all she wanetd to do was to fufil her mother's wishes. I was the same, I didn't care how angry Hayate would be with me...even though she wouldn't. All I could think about was saving her from the curse."

"That's true....but Lio told me that her opponent said their leader will bring a new world to them, and the current one is corrupted."

"I see. That's different from my case. They seem to be thinking about their own intentions....or maybe they wanted tranquility, like me....when you strive for what you want, you don't care about what others say. You just press on."

"That's true....But...if we have to fight to bring our words across, we can defintely do it! We will show them the error of their ways! As long as we stop them and show the truth, then I don't mind fighting..."

"I guess you're right then, Vivio. They're not so bad anyway. Man, all these good things come from Nanoha. Your mother is one great woman, Vivio."

"Hey, that's embarassing!"

"Now, why not we have some training?"

"Training?"

"What? You didn't hear? After the meeting with the rest, we're going to have a welcome back fight!"

".......WHA!??!!?!?"
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Funny, right? XD

But wait! There's one more story! After reading a new story V_K made, I decided to back up the story I made a long time ago xD. Only, with a new title. It's called......

Shugo Chara! Atarashi Jidai desu~!

It's bassically a parody of Shugo Chara, but with a twist. And here's the introduction:

Introduction

1 year has passed since the Guardians VS Easter saga has ended. Except for Yaya, who is having her last year in Seiyo Academy, the Guardians have left to middle school. However, in Tsubasa Academy (gosh, that's a LAME name! XD), dream continue to roam in there. One particular student, Yanami Hachou, heard about the Guardians, and also believed they were real. With this, she also wished she was her true self, and sure enough, she found 3 eggs the following morning.

Unfortunatly, in the place of Easter, was a familiar company....AWARE! They have lied to the public they are going to stop all their evil deeds, but they are secretly causing X Eggs, stronger than the ones Easter made. Now, Hachou and her Guardians-like club are going to have to defeat them....

Lame plot XD. Ok, wait for more!
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Posted: Oct 15 2009, 08:58 AM


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Once again, so sorry for the delay. I'm making a new story called....

TamaHouseRawks! 2

The Introduction will be in the main character's POV.

Introduction

Hi there! I'm Inka, a 14 year old 1_VioletchiBlink.gif living in Singapore. I attend Eastwood Secondary, which I hated first but now I don't have too many problems. A new year has started, and I expected a nice second year in Eastwood. Unfortunatly, due to a prank by my parents, things aren't going so well....

You see, ever since I was 5, I always liked music. So one day my mum asked me if I wanted to join a music club. Immediatly I said yes, but here was the catch: It was in Japan! So now I have to spend until Christmas 2010 in JAPAN. Doh! I can't believe I draged my friends; Li Ying the 11jvhjo.gif , Kris the Shellutchi and Darren the 1-15yw3ki.gif into it! I made such a fool outta myself. So now the four of us have to spend almost a year of music in Japan. Holy Cow, will we ever return to Singapore alive?
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