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 It's art
Martin
Posted: Nov 7 2010, 03:10 PM


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I'm just going to post art in here as I do it rather than clutter up and derail the off-topic thread.

Because I'm too shy to post it anywhere else.

Here are some comic pages. I didn't like where the comic I was working on in the spring was going. I was making it up as I went a long and the story got to a place I didn't want it to be. It would have taken too long to get to where I wanted to be and I already didn't like the art anyway. So I'm trying to start it over with some slightly better planning now while also not constraining myself to any specific art style - the third page has a completely different look.

http://i828.photobucket.com/albums/zz201/D...dc0001final.png

http://i828.photobucket.com/albums/zz201/D...dc0002final.png
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Martin
Posted: Nov 8 2010, 01:06 PM


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I am pretty much terrible at writing dialogue. I really like the art style I started using here.

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Henry
Posted: Nov 11 2010, 12:14 AM


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I agree, the art style is good. Still a little early to tell if you're terrible at writing dialogue. A few pages is not a good lithmus test for that. Besides, even if you are terrible, the only way to stop being terrible is to keep writing.


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