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 Crystal Saga, Saga Three!!
Edward Elric
Posted: Feb 22 2008, 06:05 PM


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"Lanawar stay with us, we need your help! we have to find alamera!" She clung to Gu'arthens mane and rubbed his arm gently as he ran. "Alamera," she wispered, "please be ok. we have to fix this, for you!"

The cold was warm and inviting, the darkness a sky filled with shining stars. Nothing stirred, just blissful peace. Nothing made a sound, just the dead silence of creation, like a gathering of beings or atoms, particles forming, coming togather to bring about the structure of the first single element. The soul. She began to feel a tingly sensation as awarness flooded through her, an awareness that woke her being, her body and made her realise that she was dreaming. Though the sky still night to her eyes and the silence still there, she remembered. Remembered a person, so kind, and helpfu;, who needed help, but wanted to protect, to care and to love. This being began to form from the particles, the atoms, the energy. They formed blonde hair, a large figure, a strong build, a shield and clothes yellow in colour. Talismons hung from his neck and an inviting grin on his face. Alamera recognized this face and flung her own being, her soul into it and there, she rememberd everything she forgot. In sacraficing her self to the mountain, and to previouses sacrifices, she gained the one thing most dear to her. Her love... for Lanawar. Here she woke and saw his face glowing in hers, his gorgous eyes, bright smile and warm arms. Kirstan was there too, and gu'arthen and Everyone else. There was no more snow and no wind, no earthquakes and fires, no death. Everyone was there. (everyone, i'm god moding for once) in a beautiful sunset of colours, orange and pink and red and yellow, the warmest feeling you get after a snow storm. And they all welcomed her back. She realized mistakes, and things she'd forgoten. Everything seemed so clear to her now, all her past actions and problems and solutions, feelings and impulses and most of all, her past accomplishments. Everything was laid straight before her, and there she remained with Lanawar, Kirstan, Gu'athen Andrew and Satsuki, Dye and Lilith, Are, Ga-Calin and Flora, Lex's sister, The twins, Kasuchi, Lanawars friends, Nike, (and anyone else i forgot). A fit ending for all of them, together, the way they were down there on the earth, bringing about peace and their fates the way they looked for things. Though things were not complete yet, Alamera knew this, they would be soon, when they were returned to the earth to start anew and create their own and kindle life once again as it was meant to, without cooruption, evil and darkness, and most of all, with friendship at it's strogest. " TOGETHER FOREVER! " And they waited for earth to accept them, as they were. Soone things calmed down and began to grow. This is where they began.

This here is the end of Crystal Saga... now start the new one for peats sake...


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Alamera the mysterious warrior, Kirstan, the animal keeper
Armstrong: "i think i'll go cut a years worth of fire wood." Winry wanted to take apart his watch, hehehe
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Gaara
Posted: Feb 25 2008, 10:10 PM


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*applause* Wow nice ending.


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[SIZE=7][FONT=Impact][I][COLOR=blue]My Heart is Forever Yours To Keep, My Body For You To Use. You Are My Heart, My Soul, My Purpose. I Live For You And No One Else
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Edward Elric
Posted: Feb 26 2008, 07:31 PM


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thanks soo much!! no one has said that yet! yay!! i'm sooo proud of it! i said you guys should print it out, laminate it, get m to sign it and frame it and then plate the frame in silver and gold! i thought it was the best writing i've ever done!!! hehe, anyway, no more conceitedness... thank you very much!!!


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Alamera the mysterious warrior, Kirstan, the animal keeper
Armstrong: "i think i'll go cut a years worth of fire wood." Winry wanted to take apart his watch, hehehe
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