Dreams of Sakura 4 - Comments

Well, I'm starting this for all the guests that visit since only members can post new topics. So now even guests can leave comments her in this thread.

Things not to leave: Errors a spellchecker can catch

Stuff to comment on:
- Comment on the story
- Ask questions about what has happened, I may not answer 'future' questions. Feel free to ask though, discussion gets me going.
- Properly spelt typos, I sound words out in my head and my fingers do the rest automatically. As such, I end up typing entirely different words sometimes. Some are just coincidental typos, such as 'of' instead of 'off'
- Anything else, just leave common typos out, my spellchecker will catch them when I go to publish this.

Well, apparently I have to scour the internet for commentary ¬.¬

This is from a Europian message board.
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Wieder mal n gutes Fic gefunden.

Dreams of Sakura von Valorphoenix

Ranma wurde entführt. Und die Entführer kennen ihn von früher?
Wird er freiwillig nach Nerima zurückkommen?

Ich finde die Story sehr gut. Auch wenn Actionfans gewarnt sind. Es ist bis jetzt keine richtige Kampfszene vorgekommen. Trotzdem wert einen Blick drauf zu werfen.
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Again times n good Fic found.
Dreams OF Sakura of Valorphoenix

Ranma was kidnapped. And the kidnappers know it from in former times? Will it return voluntarily after Nerima?

I find those very good to story. Even if Actionfans are warned. No correct combat scene occurred up to now. To throw nevertheless worth a view drauf.
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Okay, lack of action scenes. mhmm. . that should be fixed in a chapter or two.

Wow, I should have been checking your page more often. This is a great idea (well, I think so), and I'm exceptionally glad that we can follow your progress like this. It also lets us comment about each section as it comes too. The ones you have done so far have been fantastic, and I definately look forward to the planned ones.

hehe, well I like it very much.

Keeping Word or some other pord processor with lots of spell checking feature sopen eats up a bunch of resources. Now all I have to do it open my DoS thread in a new tab and I can add anytime I want. All I have open for it now is a single browser tab. (Tabbed browsing rocks)

What does uten mean BTW?

Oh there may also be new stories from other authors done in the same way. Eternity is currently playing with one of my old plots. Dunno if I ever published any of it, so it might be entirely new to everyone else.

I think Uten is the Chimp?? from the anime Vandread? could be wrong on that mind you ^^

Makes me think of Utena for obvious reasons.

heh Indeed ^^;

I just added one of my plot bubbles to the second scene in DoS

(plot bubble)

Unlike my bubbles in previous works which span entire chapters worth of plot, it just has the immediate skeleton for that scene, so it shouldn't spoil too much.

I'm going to start doing that if there aren't any objections, because I almost forgot to add the incense scene.

Oh, this recently came to my attention, but guests can't see if a thread has 'new posts' or not except by the order in which they're listed.

This means guests can't see when DoS 4 gets mod bumped for having new material. They can see it however go up further in the thread listing.

All I can say is: WOOHOO!!

I have read some but can't really comment since to me the content is still kind of small athough I like what is there. I'm no english expert so don't ask me about grammar.

Other than that, another great read. Keep it up please!

I'll take that to mean everything is good so far then -_^

I added a 'bump arrow' to the story to show where the most recently written chunk of material starts.

I also develoiped a slightly new method of writing when not in the mood to write for Eternity. It also seems to work for me when I'm not quite in thw writing mood. It's slow, but better than nothing.

Oh, and on a note, Washu-chan is VP too. I just got bored and decided to spread my posting over two accounts.

I originally created this one as a joke so Washu-chan could be listed as mod of the Science forum.

Just found one. I have an idea of what you are trying to convey but I don't think you wrote this the way you intended.

Later.

(VP): Fixed

eh yeah, gaze, now I gotta find that and fix it

Not terribly happy with that sentance anyways.

I hope you finish this soon, I've been waiting for a while. your works are well written, and i hope to see the finished product soon
Drachonus

Maybe this is a bit late, but i think "uten" means "without". Atleast it means "without" in norwegian, and norwegian being somewhat related to german it is rather likely.

I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!!!!



Thank you
-Ki Nexus

That's a strange bit of info. I always figured it was related to Utena and had a Japanese origin, not that it really mattered. I was kinda hoping Uten would answer

Sigh it has been a year and no updates Anything coming up?

Maybe not the right thread, but the picture (in chapter 1) seems unavailable/missing.

And as I'm posting anyway: Great story, please continue