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Erokose
Posted: Oct 17 2004, 06:43 AM


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This is only a little part cause I don't want my idea being stolen. The whole thing is about 90 pages but I will post one little part.

Lauthra smiled. "Time for the onslaught".
The army formed ranks and they stood opposing each other. Lauthra rasied his hand up. "Men and Women, time to go out with the onslaught".
Lauthra dropped his hand and the army charged. The enemy army also charged. As they were about to collide the first two ranks of Lauthra's army dropped to the ground. As they did the ranks behind shot arrows. Then they dropped and the rank behind shot arrows and then they dropped as more arrows were shot. Three ranks of the enemy's army dropped with arrows sticking out of them. Then Lauthra's army jumped back up and charged into the remaining troops. A smile crossed Lauthra's lips and he drew his sword. He charged up and hacked down any who stood in his way, within a few minutes he found the lieutenant. The lieutenant looked horror struck as Lauthra bring his sword down upon his head. Blood and brains splattered across the ground and Lauthra wiped his face. Then moved to his next target and hacked down the man with no trouble. He looked around the area and saw carnage. He ran across the battlefield and hacked down all who opposed him. Soon the battle was over and Lauthra ordered his men to kill all the survivors and to make a display out of some. The gruesome task was set and survivors were disemboweled and some had their heads put on spikes. By the end of the day all the survivors had been slaughtered and this area was now of death and decay. The army matched on





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conman
Posted: Oct 21 2004, 08:10 AM


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biggrin.gif A very nice story it is , and write some more , you should.


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Lauthra
Posted: May 16 2006, 09:54 PM


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Yes, seems cool indeed, just wondering where you heard the name Lauthra, I created that name in the 9th grade, eight years ago now wink.gif for a story as well.
Would like to read some more!
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Tyranid_Killer
Posted: Mar 11 2007, 06:49 PM


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It's okay... needs some more detail.
And why did you have to use onslaught two times?
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