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Call Girl, Scouter drabble| Vegetachik7 |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 02:46 AM
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Radditz paced back and forth impatiently, his tail whipping about. In his sweaty hand he clutched his precious green scouter, the object that would finally bring him the release he needed. But he had not heard from the voice on the other end for days, even after appointing proper times to call.
Growling angrily, the young adult kicked a rock near his foot and stormed off into the dusty land he had just conquered. He was a saiyajin warrior and he demanded obedience. Once that girl called him… she was going to be a great deal of trouble. He supposed it didn’t matter at the moment anyway. It was more important to find the annoying prince and be on their way back to Frieza’s base. Now he just needed to find the rambunctious teen. Fading into the barren orange fog, the longhaired warrior trotted off into the silence. From behind the tall hot rocks, amused eyes squinted, one dark iris covered by a pale magenta scouter. A voice crackled into the young prince’s ear. “Hello, this is Space Call Girls. How may I be of service today?” Vegeta’s boyish heart pounded excitedly just from hearing the feminine voice on the other end. “Yes, this is Radditz. I think I’d like to hear from Sheila today,” the young prince replied. His scouter connected to the girl that Radditz had anxiously been awaiting to speak to. The longhaired warrior could be of great use once in a while. *Yay first drabble EVER! -------------------- Fanfiction.net
My Webpage Paper Demon DA Bound, abused, and full of angst? Just how I love my Saiyajin Prince. Watch 3000 Miles to Graceland! Brian Drummond is in it! |
   
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| NansJns |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 04:25 AM
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 Defender of the Canon Couples! Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 2,631 Member No.: 165 Joined: 18-April 05 |
 Vegeta, you stinker! The things teenagers will do with other people's ID! Great first drabble, Vegetachik!  *~*Nans*~* -------------------- "The best men are imaginary - and they don't legally belong to my imagination!" - Me.
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| Gozar |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 04:38 AM
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 The Son Of Trunks Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,244 Member No.: 363 Joined: 30-June 06 |
That was awesome
--------------------  [[My YouTube Profile]] [[My LiveJournal]] "You hate the fact that your powerless to stop me, that your completly outmatched, well imagine feeling the way you do now all of the time like the people of this planet do. FOOLS, how do you think my Master Gohan felt when you ganged up on him in the rain and he had no way out. Well now it's your turn, I hope you enjoy it."-Trunks |
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| Macha |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 04:43 AM
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 Addy: Macha, 69 Gutter Rd. The Deep End, Crazy 75469  Group: Patroness Posts: 3,422 Member No.: 290 Joined: 9-January 06 |
GAH! I don't know what to say, other than I LOVED IT!
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| pixelgoddess |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 05:34 AM
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Hehe - poor Radditz - wonder if his scouter is charged by the minute? Can you imagine his bill?
 Vegeta's such a dawg.  -------------------- Pixelgoddess
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| Vegetachik7 |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 06:01 AM
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Pure Vegeta Angst Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 1,340 Member No.: 375 Joined: 18-August 06 |
Haha...aw...thank ya'll.
 And yeah...perhaps even Frieza's base can trace these calls! lol! -------------------- Fanfiction.net
My Webpage Paper Demon DA Bound, abused, and full of angst? Just how I love my Saiyajin Prince. Watch 3000 Miles to Graceland! Brian Drummond is in it! |
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| Katiefoolery |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 08:20 AM
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Absolutely wonderful! So much for all these people who can't write drabbles...
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| Bardockgurl |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 09:01 AM
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 Will you people please STOP doing this? *gestures folornly at table of muffins and ignored posters and badges* It's going to be very hard for me to win this competition if people actually enter it...  Especially when they're this good and original... *stamps foot and  * -------------------- Write about us, or face the wrath of Bardock...
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| Gozar |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 08:22 PM
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The Son Of Trunks Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,244 Member No.: 363 Joined: 30-June 06 |
Aw poor mommy. I have an idea, you could...write your own, but a bunch in different genre's.
-------------------- [[My YouTube Profile]] [[My LiveJournal]] "You hate the fact that your powerless to stop me, that your completly outmatched, well imagine feeling the way you do now all of the time like the people of this planet do. FOOLS, how do you think my Master Gohan felt when you ganged up on him in the rain and he had no way out. Well now it's your turn, I hope you enjoy it."-Trunks |
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| Bardockgurl |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 08:42 PM
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*blinks* But... writing one myself would require some effort...  That's not my style at all... -------------------- Write about us, or face the wrath of Bardock...
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| Gozar |
Posted: Feb 14 2007, 10:44 PM
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The Son Of Trunks Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,244 Member No.: 363 Joined: 30-June 06 |
Hmm, that's true. You can always try beiing people to write one for ya XD
-------------------- [[My YouTube Profile]] [[My LiveJournal]] "You hate the fact that your powerless to stop me, that your completly outmatched, well imagine feeling the way you do now all of the time like the people of this planet do. FOOLS, how do you think my Master Gohan felt when you ganged up on him in the rain and he had no way out. Well now it's your turn, I hope you enjoy it."-Trunks |
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| eshfemme |
Posted: Feb 15 2007, 05:31 AM
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That sounds so plausible especially since I tend to think that Trunks inherited his mischievous side more from Vegeta than from Bulma. Poor Radditz. He pretty much was the easy victim for Vegeta there, huh?
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| Vegetachik7 |
Posted: Feb 15 2007, 06:24 AM
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Pure Vegeta Angst Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 1,340 Member No.: 375 Joined: 18-August 06 |
Haha, Vegeta needed somebody to bother. What better target than Radditz?
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My Webpage Paper Demon DA Bound, abused, and full of angst? Just how I love my Saiyajin Prince. Watch 3000 Miles to Graceland! Brian Drummond is in it! |
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| Rowina |
Posted: Feb 16 2007, 12:52 AM
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This is hilarious! Congratulations!
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| boryfun |
Posted: Apr 25 2007, 05:05 AM
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First the idea of Space Call Girls is fantastic. Second, Vegeta stealing Radditz' identity is perfect, especially since he's a horny teenager. -------------------- My Art
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