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Untitled drabble by Bdegrees, February 'Saiyans in Scouters' theme

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Bdegrees	Posted: Feb 4 2007, 04:47 AM
What's hidden in there??????? ^o^ Group: Moderator - Welcome Wagon Posts: 3,437 Member No.: 295 Joined: 19-January 06	beep “Tunnel-rat... power level... point 8...” beep “Flying swamp lizard... power level... 1 point 2...” beep “Water snake... power level... point 9...” beep “Swamp pterodon... power level 67... Hm, big one...” Bardock sprang up from where he lay in the grass, snatching up a nearby stone and chucking it at his team mate. “By the Gods, Toma!” he cried, exasperated. “I know you’re bored waiting for the repair ship, but give it a rest, will ya!?” The other Saiyan gave him a weak grin, deactivating his scouter while the rest of the stranded five-man team sniggered. “Sorry, boss...” Thanks to Katie for reading this over and correct the WAY too many errors I made. Now you can all imagine the pain of my lovely, saint of a beta, Rowina. (Not that my regualr posts don't give you any idea. Love commas much, Bdie?) Anyway, this is my first drabble ever. Hope you liked it. And no, I have no idea how they got stranded... but I would love to hear your ideas. -------------------- Randomizer by the lovely Katiefoolery The Queen of Shameless Self Promotion!!!! Unlikely Bond on MediaMiner. Also available at PixelGoddess' Closet! The cure for writer's cramp is writer's block.

Posted: Feb 4 2007, 05:22 AM

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Well now that you've just proved that you're not horrible at writing drabbles, you'll have to write a lot more.

QUOTE (Bdie)

And no, I have no idea how they got stranded... but I would love to hear your ideas.

My theory: somebody sat down on their pods while they were in oozaru form.

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pixelgoddess	Posted: Feb 4 2007, 05:36 AM
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Bdegrees	Posted: Feb 4 2007, 05:39 AM
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Macha	Posted: Feb 4 2007, 05:51 AM
Addy: Macha, 69 Gutter Rd. The Deep End, Crazy 75469 Group: Patroness Posts: 3,414 Member No.: 290 Joined: 9-January 06	OMG! Ah! Yes, more of this universe needs to be explored! Well done B! And here I thought the scouter was being used for hunting purposes. LOL, and it was just out of boredom instead! That's great! -------------------- Never underestimate the power of a good beta! Prompt aka SPORK If it smells like rubbing alcohol, don't drink it. is now in pursuit of muses Elmer Fudd voice Shhhh, be verry, verry quiet. I'm hunting wabbits! The more smut the better!

Gozar	Posted: Feb 4 2007, 06:09 AM
The Son Of Trunks Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,244 Member No.: 363 Joined: 30-June 06	LOL, that's awesome. I laughed so hard at that silly Bardock. -------------------- [[My YouTube Profile]] [[My LiveJournal]] "You hate the fact that your powerless to stop me, that your completly outmatched, well imagine feeling the way you do now all of the time like the people of this planet do. FOOLS, how do you think my Master Gohan felt when you ganged up on him in the rain and he had no way out. Well now it's your turn, I hope you enjoy it."-Trunks

Cantare	Posted: Feb 4 2007, 09:33 PM
Beyond Fan Group: Members Posts: 144 Member No.: 404 Joined: 2-November 06	Haha, that is great! Really original idea. I do wish the Saiyan world was more explored during the actual series. But I guess the lack of exploration leaves a lot open for writers like you to craft brilliant ideas out of. -------------------- Cantare "I will sing of Your mercy that leads me through valleys of sorrow to rivers of joy." Sung and Written.

Bardockgurl	Posted: Feb 4 2007, 09:46 PM
Resident Bardock Handler Group: 5000 Post Penthouse Posts: 6,854 Member No.: 28 Joined: 27-June 04	bows deeply That was frigging great! I can so see that happening! Kudos to Bdie and her poor, bored saiyans! -------------------- Write about us, or face the wrath of Bardock...

tryniamerin	Posted: Feb 4 2007, 10:25 PM
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Michelle	Posted: Feb 5 2007, 04:31 AM
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NansJns	Posted: Feb 5 2007, 05:24 AM
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ilex9	Posted: Feb 8 2007, 06:07 PM
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Bdegrees	Posted: Feb 9 2007, 12:27 AM
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eshfemme	Posted: Feb 14 2007, 04:59 PM
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Rowina	Posted: Feb 16 2007, 01:10 AM
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