Count Down to Extinction, a battles to the death story in yaoi
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Count Down to Extinction, a battles to the death story in yaoi| Macha |
Posted: Aug 16 2011, 01:26 PM
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 Addy: Macha, 69 Gutter Rd. The Deep End, Crazy 75469  Group: Patroness Posts: 3,414 Member No.: 290 Joined: 9-January 06  |
There's a lot of stories I'm not intersted in reading right now.
The story summary at AFF wasn't exactly interesting to me, so I passed this one up several times. Then got bored, read the reviews, and decided to give a shot. I'm still not certain I like this story, but I don't hate it either. It's stuck on chapter 3, and I'm hoping to see a chapter 4 sometime soon - maybe then I can decide if it's something I want to attach a review to. It happens after the Tarble special, so everyone can kind of figure out, there are other saiyans out there. Ice-jin are collecting them, keeping them caged by dampening their ki, and having them fight one on one to the death for entertainment of more types of Aliens, and gambling. It looks as though battles are not to take place in an arena, but whole planets. I don't know if their ki is being kept dampened during the fighting or not. Either way, Goku trained under 100 x gravity, and I'm not certain any of the other saiyans had reasons to do so, so his muscle strength should be unusal, and I'm not seeing that so far. Although he didn't continue his training in the gravity chamber like Vegeta does. No appearance by Vegeta, yet, but there are mensions of him. Here is the link at AFF - http://anime2.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600023572 -------------------- Never underestimate the power of a good beta!
Prompt aka SPORK If it smells like rubbing alcohol, don't drink it. *is now in pursuit of muses* *Elmer Fudd voice* Shhhh, be verry, verry quiet. I'm hunting wabbits!    The more smut the better! |
   
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| Piccolo_is_green |
Posted: Aug 16 2011, 02:25 PM
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I don't usually read yaoi, but the plot sounds interesting to me. I've skimmed over the first chapter and I'm going to go back to it when I have more time so I can read it properly. I always love fics that involve a whole bunch of Saiyans. When I read more of it I'll tell you what I think.
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| Macha |
Posted: Aug 17 2011, 01:43 AM
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Addy: Macha, 69 Gutter Rd. The Deep End, Crazy 75469 Group: Patroness Posts: 3,414 Member No.: 290 Joined: 9-January 06 |
 Thanks Piccolo_is_green!Pix? What is up with the random links in my original post? Every underlined word is not something I added. -------------------- Never underestimate the power of a good beta!
Prompt aka SPORK If it smells like rubbing alcohol, don't drink it. *is now in pursuit of muses* *Elmer Fudd voice* Shhhh, be verry, verry quiet. I'm hunting wabbits! The more smut the better! |
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| pixelgoddess |
Posted: Aug 17 2011, 02:37 AM
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I see no underlined links - I suspect it's that dumb smart-link thing in Internet Explorer. I don't see it in Firefox.
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| Macha |
Posted: Nov 14 2011, 12:53 PM
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Addy: Macha, 69 Gutter Rd. The Deep End, Crazy 75469 Group: Patroness Posts: 3,414 Member No.: 290 Joined: 9-January 06 |
This one has been updated. That's a long time between updates.
I actually think the writingtechnique has improved with this chapter, which was nice to see! -------------------- Never underestimate the power of a good beta!
Prompt aka SPORK If it smells like rubbing alcohol, don't drink it. *is now in pursuit of muses* *Elmer Fudd voice* Shhhh, be verry, verry quiet. I'm hunting wabbits! The more smut the better! |
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