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| DanceswithElvis |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 05:20 PM
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Bad element ![]() Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,208 Member No.: 94 Joined: 5-December 04 |
A 'what if' that occurs after the ending of the Watchmen graphic novel/movie. Nite Owl centric.
*has been added over at ff.net under a different title. "Another Rainy Ending." ------ The lie was never worth it. He understood that now. Daniel flopped down on the muddy ground between two nondescript markers in the grave yard. Taking a swig of whiskey directly from the bottle he stared up into the rain. The battered, too small, fedora he wore falling to the ground. It'd been a year since then. Since the world was saved, but everything worth dying for destroyed. A year of nights interrupted by memories of red hair and piercing blue eyes; of blood on the snow. It'd been long enough for Daniel to understand that his friend had been right. The truth had to be told, that justice had to be served. So he tried. Now he was here. Drinking with two silent friends and waiting. Gathering up the fallen fedora he leaned on the simple marker named “Kovacs,” and took another drink, savoring the burn of the whiskey through his system. It was five to midnight when he felt the cold press of a revolver against the back of his head. Chuckling sadly to himself, he didn't even flinch at the implications. “Just remember to bring us flowers, Veidt.” This post has been edited by DanceswithElvis on Jun 1 2009, 05:56 PM -------------------- What's one more body sacrificed to the ever growing cult of nice?
Bene, cum Latine nescias, nolo manus meas in te maculare Good bye. |
| Amers |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 05:23 PM
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This gave me shivers, Michelle. It was great, loved the end.
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| DanceswithElvis |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 05:29 PM
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Bad element ![]() Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,208 Member No.: 94 Joined: 5-December 04 |
Thank you. Odd song prompt drabble. -------------------- What's one more body sacrificed to the ever growing cult of nice?
Bene, cum Latine nescias, nolo manus meas in te maculare Good bye. |
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| Amers |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 05:32 PM
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I'm glad the odd song did!
I'll save this little master piece -------------------- ![]() ![]() ![]() |
| DanceswithElvis |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 06:00 PM
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Bad element ![]() Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,208 Member No.: 94 Joined: 5-December 04 |
Master piece? This? No. Thank you for the sentiment though... There are far better stories out there. This was just my little disjointed Dan angst coming through. -------------------- What's one more body sacrificed to the ever growing cult of nice?
Bene, cum Latine nescias, nolo manus meas in te maculare Good bye. |
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| Amers |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 06:03 PM
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Excuse moi? I think it's a master piece, I really like this kind of writing. So to me it's a master piece.
*sticks out tongue* teehee -------------------- ![]() ![]() ![]() |
| DanceswithElvis |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 06:11 PM
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Bad element ![]() Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,208 Member No.: 94 Joined: 5-December 04 |
Yes, ma'am. <shakes head> Odd taste...you know. -------------------- What's one more body sacrificed to the ever growing cult of nice?
Bene, cum Latine nescias, nolo manus meas in te maculare Good bye. |
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| Amers |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 06:23 PM
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Now, tell me you're sorry! -------------------- ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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| DanceswithElvis |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 06:30 PM
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Bad element ![]() Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,208 Member No.: 94 Joined: 5-December 04 |
Sorry? Um...kay? I'm sorry? -------------------- What's one more body sacrificed to the ever growing cult of nice?
Bene, cum Latine nescias, nolo manus meas in te maculare Good bye. |
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| Amers |
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 06:50 PM
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okay, I'm just being crazy...just ignore me... -------------------- ![]() ![]() ![]() |
| DanceswithElvis |
Posted: Jun 2 2009, 01:05 AM
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-------------------- What's one more body sacrificed to the ever growing cult of nice?
Bene, cum Latine nescias, nolo manus meas in te maculare Good bye. |
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| Caprice |
Posted: Jun 2 2009, 03:43 AM
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![]() Bulma Briefs ![]() Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,125 Member No.: 562 Joined: 7-February 08 |
That was so powerful. It truly drew me in. The angst was palpable.
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| DanceswithElvis |
Posted: Jun 2 2009, 03:56 AM
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Bad element ![]() Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,208 Member No.: 94 Joined: 5-December 04 |
<3! Thank you...it was such a weird quickie that popped into my head while listening to "Pancho and Lefty" of all songs. >.< -------------------- What's one more body sacrificed to the ever growing cult of nice?
Bene, cum Latine nescias, nolo manus meas in te maculare Good bye. |
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| Caprice |
Posted: Jun 2 2009, 04:16 AM
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![]() Bulma Briefs ![]() Group: 1000 Post Lounge Posts: 3,125 Member No.: 562 Joined: 7-February 08 |
Lol. You are so wonderfully nuts, just how I like them! <3 <3<3<3<3<3
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| DanceswithElvis |
Posted: Jun 3 2009, 05:40 PM
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-------------------- What's one more body sacrificed to the ever growing cult of nice?
Bene, cum Latine nescias, nolo manus meas in te maculare Good bye. |
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